Writing with Power
Warm-Up: Quick Review ⚡
- S — one subject + one verb, complete thought, nothing extra
- CP — two independent clauses joined by and
- CX — dependent clause introduced by Although
- S — one subject + one verb, complete thought
- CX — dependent clause introduced by because
- CP — two independent clauses joined by but
Reading: A Real-World Text 📱
Teenagers today spend an average of five hours per day on social media, and researchers say the consequences are serious. Rates of anxiety, depression, and loneliness among young people have risen sharply since smartphones became widespread. Although some studies suggest that social media helps people feel connected, a growing body of evidence points in the opposite direction. Several governments are now passing laws to restrict access for children, and some schools have banned phones entirely. Technology companies argue that their platforms are not responsible for mental health outcomes, yet internal documents have shown they knew about the harm for years. The world is finally paying attention, but the damage may already be deep.
2. Do you think five hours a day on social media is typical for people you know?
3. Is this a problem in your generation? Why or why not?
Sentence Hunt 🔍
Find: 2 Simple (S) · 2 Compound (CP) · 2 Complex (CX)
Teenagers today spend an average of five hours per day on social media, and researchers say the consequences are serious. Rates of anxiety, depression, and loneliness among young people have risen sharply since smartphones became widespread. Although some studies suggest that social media helps people feel connected, a growing body of evidence points in the opposite direction. Several governments are now passing laws to restrict access for children, and some schools have banned phones entirely. Technology companies argue that their platforms are not responsible for mental health outcomes, yet internal documents have shown they knew about the harm for years. The world is finally paying attention, but the damage may already be deep.
- CP — Sentence 1: "Teenagers today spend… and researchers say…" → joined by and
- CX — Sentence 2: "Rates of anxiety… since smartphones became widespread" → dependent clause with since
- CX — Sentence 3: "Although some studies suggest… a growing body…" → Although introduces dependent clause
- CP — Sentence 4: "Several governments… and some schools…" → joined by and
- CP — Sentence 5: "Tech companies argue… yet internal documents have shown…" → joined by yet
- CP — Sentence 6: "The world is finally paying attention, but…" → joined by but
- ⚡ Coach note: There are NO pure simple sentences in this text! Use this as a discussion moment — this is how real, sophisticated writing works. Complexity is a sign of a strong writer.
New Pattern: Compound-Complex 🔗⚡
→ The depth of complex — one idea depends on another
→ The power of compound — two or more connected ideas
The result: sentences that think out loud — showing contrast, cause, and connection at the same time.
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Closure & Feedback 🎯
✓ Practiced: Identifying sentence types in real-world text
✓ Learned: Compound-Complex sentences — the most powerful type
✓ Applied: All 4 types in your own writing